My dad in a few words

Hello people. I made this post because I wanted to show you something I wrote for my Language course at LV. The task was: To describe someone from your past that you want to see again. I couldn't think of anyone else but my father, so I finally did it. My teacher said that I must be very proud of him, and it's true. The only thing I regret is that I made my mom cry :(  She was really sad and I was too, but I think that my brain is kind of trained to NOT CRY, because I don't believe I'm strong, I just don't want to show my weakness (the worst part of myself). Anyway, here is my composition: 

The person I’m going to describe is someone I won’t be able to see again but it’s truly the only person I want to rejoin: that person is my father. My dad’s name was Jorge Osvaldo Maidana. He was 46 years old when he was diagnosed with brain cancer and died the first day of March 2003. He was an electrician but the job he did best was being my dad.

 When you first saw my father, he would give you the impression of a weak man. He was a tallish scraggy man, with a pale complexion and short black hair. He had a round face, brown eyes and a moustache. Always wearing casual clothes, he would not stand out anywhere.

After you met him, you would realize he was a strong, intelligent man who always did everything in the best way possible. Sometimes, when I couldn’t understand something from school, he would explain it to me in different ways until I got the idea. He was an expert on doing things right: whether it was work tasks or everyday chores, he would make sure everything was in the right place and worked properly.

The main reason why I want to see him again is because I miss him very much, but It often happens to me that, when I’m going through a tough situation or I have to make a difficult decision, I always wonder what my dad would think or do. If I were to see him again, I would definitely ask him for some advice.